Overall, this volume has me feeling pretty mixed about it, as the author is clearly more comfortable in writing the slice-of-life and romance parts, but the fantasy/adventure parts are falling really flat here. While it's definitely sappy as heck, it's still pretty enjoyable to read provided one takes it in stride. Things even get spiced up when our lead character even invites another character to join him and Marie to his world and go off a hot-spring trip. This makes the world-building attempt really weak and does showcase the author's limitations.Ĭonversely, the modern day side is pretty well-written, and while I'd hate to say this, plays out like the sappiest romance bordering to almost blatant wish-fulfillment fanfiction. The major issue here is that the plot has our hero shuffling from a multitude of places while introducing a rather weak antagonist plus many other supporting characters, resulting in a rather confusing mess of events seemingly only joined as an effort to clear off bullet points. However, the fantasy side of things seems rather badly written, even by the low standards the previous volume sets in that aspect. Continuing on the carefree tone of the previous volume, this volume has our intrepid couple continue their adventures of both worlds.
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